Roland's Fortune
I'll be honest. I'm not personally satisfied with this one, and hopefully I'll make liberal use of our agreed-upon one-week grace period to make edits, which I will note here. In the meantime, enjoy. It still has a redeeming feature or two.
EDITS:
5/7/08- Now with an expanded midsection so that hopefully it feels less rushed and more finished (at the advice of J., René, and myself). The dialogue in the final scene has been toned down (at the advice of René).
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Much improved, sir. I like it quite a bit.
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